刚看了ecology筒子的翻译，3句意思基本ok，但有几个地方我有点不同见解，你看看不知有没道理，我没做过游戏汉化，所以有不对还请见谅：）% b1 L/ C* T3 c% n7 \
% _. G2 v" v3 HBerlin, apartment: Nina is attacked as soon as she enters the apartment. （还没玩游戏，如果Nina真的给人袭击的话，下面就算我白说了。不过从整个段落的意思来看，这里的attack解释成袭击可能不太贴切，我认为这里讲的更多的是心理上的，nina看到房间里乱七八糟，“心猛得收紧”类似的意思）The apartment has been ransacked. Her concerns about her father appear to be justified. （这句好像也有点问题，我估计得不错的话，前面肯定有一段说明，nina得知父亲那里可能回出什么事情，所以赶过来看看。但事情真如她所料一样发生了。“刚才关于父亲的种种担心似乎被证实了”，这样大概更贴切一点）But what are the burglars looking for? And did they find it, or will they come back again?柏林，公寓：Nina刚一进房间就遭到了攻击，整个房间也被仔细的搜查过了。出于对父亲的关心，Nina来到了这里。但是这些窃贼又是来干什么的呢？他们的寻找的东西到手了吗？还会不会再来呢？7 R* W) ~% c# B; n& v
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Berlin, museum: Nina wanted to meet her father in his office. But all she finds when she gets there is terrible chaos. What happened here?柏林，博物馆：Nina去办公室找寻父亲，却发现那里一片混乱。到底发生了什么事儿？
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Berlin, museum: Lisa's photos weren't as meaningful as hoped.（这句感觉就是这个意思，但可能这么翻更好一点：“Lisa的照片并不象预想得那样有意义”） Could the black robes be an indication of a sect? And what about the strange amulet one of them is wearing?Lisa照片的暗含意义并不是那么容易明白。那件黑色长袍会不会暗示着某个宗教流派？还有那人佩戴的奇怪护身符又意味着什么呢？4 v( I& Z3 ]+ M* d* m1 _
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发表于 2006-10-26 13:52
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